Draft Feedback

The main piece of feedback I received from Amber was that I should try to make the essay read less as a chronological timeline and analyse some of the imagery in more detail. I should also compare the different styles between each wave before moving onto the next.

• look at ways of seeing - john berger
• how we read/see and understand the images
• semiotics
• colours, layout, type
• message and meaning - take for practical
• comparison between waves
• lower/upper case, script

For Wednesday I am going to have my second draft complete, including conclusion, fourth wave and comparisons. I will also have initial ideas and development for the practical.